My ongoing tinkering with the text for Hot War has sent my off down a couple of roads recently. One regards the section on Authority in the game. This is something Graham has been struggling with, although I'm not sure what direction Grahams thoughts go in at the moment. However, I was recently struck with the realisation that having that section on authority early on in the game text could be a little intimidating. It's not theory-heavy, but does get a little dry at point.